2011年9月26日月曜日
Blogging Assignment 2 Supporting points Arakawa
My revised thesis statement is yet historical men's higher position in society.The first supporting point is that women tend to leave or quit a job due to marriage and maternity leave and this is quite obvious to women. Since people who work longer usually get manegerial positions, women do not have chance to get those positions. The next point is that there may remain a trace of men chauvinism society. As you can see, Japanese Imperial House see men more important than women, and there have only been male prime ministers in Japan. From things like that we unconsciouly are taught that men are sueprior to women. The last point is that there might be difference in competence between men and women but this is not well proved and so Iwould like to consider the issue myself . But this is fact that fewer number of women are in scientific field than are men and small number of women have graduated from Harvard University for instance.
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Your thesis is not yet stated in a way that expresses an strong opinion, that something is true or not true, that something is good or bad, or that something should be done or not done.
返信削除The supporting points can be used to prove your point in a fairly convincing manner, but first the thesis needs to be stated in the form of an arguable statement, not a vague noun phrase.
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