The topic I chose is historical reasons for men's higher social status in Japan. The reason I chose this is I have heard that in a company the higher the position gets, the more men work for it than women. There seems to be an unspoken but commonly shared understanding that men are somehow superior to women. I wonder why and how this idea emerged and if this could be true in competence that men are beter than women. I would look at the history of male chauvinism in Japan around the time of WWⅡ and the matters about the difference in competence between men and women. I also have a vague plan of doing a survey on couples and get results from both men and women's point of view. It would reveal how each one thinks of the other sex and how they behave in reality.
The thesis statement will be the background of men-superior society and as in a familiar matter, how couples treat the partner.
Hello Lyla,
返信削除I'd like to suggest a further focusing of your Essay 1 thesis statement as follows:
In a Japanese company, the higher the position is, the more often men work in that position than women due to factors including historical precedent, ZZZZ, and SSSSSSS.
You would need to make this more complete as part of your outlining process.